Hi everyone! We have a tiny request.....Can you help us out with something? We are creating a video for our business, Thankyou Gift Registry, and we'd like to get some feedback and suggestions about the text/wording we are going to use.
We know there are a lot of wedding vendors and businesses here on BT, who are more experienced about these kind of things, so if you can help us out.... we would really, really, really appreciate it!
Here's the text:
http://thankyouregistry.com/blog/thankyou-draft-promo-text/
Its exciting! You’re having a celebration! And friends want to give you presents… Ohhh no!
How do you suggest politely what you’d like? From lots of stores, online and those in town… as well as asking for that 4 letter “C” word “CASH” ?
Thankyou Registry has your problem solved.
Add anything you’d like, from any store in the world. And all on the same list!
Add the gifts you’d like from
Online stores
Shops in town
Or say “Cash preferred” without actually saying it.
Then, your friends and family take a look at your Thankyou Registry.
They decide where they’d like to shop, maybe at the store you listed or even easier, online, through Thankyou.
Shopping with Thankyou means your Guest ‘hands’ us the cash to give straight to you. Its safe, its secure – and we’ve been doing this a long time!
Then it’s your turn to go shopping and pick up the gifts you really want.
And the best thing is… its all on the same list!
Your gift registry, your way – start getting everything you want today!
What do you guys think? Thanks so much in advance for your suggestions.
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